We discussed the importance of creating an email cover letter in our previous post, Five Steps to a Standout Resume Email, and thought would be helpful to our job-seeking readers to provide some examples to use as a starting point for your next email cover letter.
The examples below come from real-life job seeker emails, although we’ve altered the details and contact information. Whether you prefer a “salesy” approach or you’re more of a “direct and to the point” kind of person, choose the template that suits your style. Just be sure to include these key elements in your email cover letter.
- Mention the title of the position you’re applying for in the subject line and body of your email.
- Explain where you found the job posting or how you heard about the position.
- Conclude with a subtle call to action to remind the hiring manager of the action you’d like them to take, such as, “I look forward to hearing from you.”
- List your full name and contact information in your email signature block (not just on your resume attachment).
- If applicable, quickly explain any questions that your resume may raise. For example, if you’re from out of town but planning to move close to the job location, or you’ve been at your current position for only a short time.
Email Cover Letter Examples for Legal Professionals
Example #1: If you prefer to keep it brief.
To Whom It May Concern:
I am interested in the Litigation Associate position advertised on LinkedIn. I have attached my resume and cover letter for your review.
Thank you for your time. I look forward to hearing from you.
Example #2: If you’re relocating to the city where the job opportunity is located.
Dear Hiring Manager,
I’m writing to express my interest in the Litigation Secretary position listed on Monster.com. My resume is attached for your review and consideration.
I am a fast learner, very dependable, organized, and computer savvy. I have extensive experience assisting firm attorneys and multiple paralegals, as well as supervising and managing an office. While I currently reside in Los Angeles, I will be moving to San Francisco at the end of the month.
I look forward to the opportunity to meet with you to learn more about your firm, its plans and goals, and how I might contribute to its continued success. I can be your ideal candidate if given this opportunity. Thank you.
Example #3: If a colleague referred you.
I was referred to you by a mutual acquaintance, John Smith, who said you have an opening for a litigation secretary. I have many years of experience as a litigation secretary, most of them working with managing partners. I am a professional looking for a career, not just a job. I am organized, reliable and self-motivated. I like being part of a team, but can also work independently.
Included with this e-mail is a copy of my resume for your review and consideration. Once you have had an opportunity to review my resume, please contact me if you have any questions or to arrange an interview. I look forward to speaking with you in the near future.
Thank you for your time,
Example # 4: If you’ve been at your current position for less than one year.
Please allow this introduction. My name is Jane Smith, and I have 12 years of legal secretarial experience working with managing partners of small, mid- and large-sized law firms. My current typing speed is 105 wpm from written form and 120 wpm from live dictation with the utmost accuracy. I am interested in the Litigation Secretary position advertised on your firm’s website.
I am currently working for a small civil litigation firm. However, after only 11 months in this position, the financial stability of the firm has significantly changed. Therefore I am seeking long-term tenure with a stable civil litigation firm.
Attached please find my resume and list of references. If you are interested in the professional skills and positive attributes I can contribute to your firm, please contact me at [phone number] at your convenience to schedule an interview.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Example #5: If you want to be dazzle the hiring manager with your qualifications.
Dear Recruiting Administrator:
Do you need a hardworking, creative and conscientious paralegal to meet your firm’s needs? If so, I can help you. The following is a summary of my qualifications:
- More than ten years of progressively responsible legal experience;
- Bachelor’s Degree with Honors in Business Administration;
- Exceptional verbal, written and analytical skills;
- Advanced computer skills;
- Outgoing personality and “can-do” attitude.
I would like to meet with you to discuss how I might assist your firm in fulfilling its present needs. My resume is enclosed for your review. If you need someone who is highly motivated, eager to learn, and willing to work hard to succeed, please contact me at [phone] or via e-mail: [email].
Thank you for your time and consideration,
These examples are meant to be a starting point only – add your own voice, style and experience to make your own standout (or at least solid) email cover letter.
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How would you feel if I butted in line when you were waiting to use the bathroom?
You would hate me. But why?
A little thing called etiquette - the things we do to be polite and make our behavior pleasant to others.
Sending a post-interview thank you note is a cornerstone of etiquette.
Even if you’re confident that you aced your interview, it’s good form to say thank you for the opportunity.
But like all forms of polite conversation, it’s easy to make a faux pas if you don’t know the current trends.
So, how do you write a thank you email after an interview?
This guide will answer all your post-interview thank you email questions so that you’re sure that your manners are fit for a king.
You will find out:
- If you should send a post-interview thank you email or letter.
- Who you should send a thank you email to and when.
- How to write a thank you email and how to add impressive personal touches.
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1. Yes, You Always Need to Send a Thank You Email After an Interview
There is no question - you must ALWAYS send a thank you email after an interview.
As I mentioned above, it’s just a part of “post-interview” etiquette. A common courtesy.
But 57% of candidates don’t send thank you notes after an interview - even though hiring managers expect it.
For example, 86% of hiring managerssaid the lack of a thank you note after an interview sends the message that the candidate lacks follow through, and 56% said that it shows the candidate isn’t serious about the position.
So, the bottom line is that you must always send a thank you email after an interview.
Here's an example of what a post-interview thank you email should look like:
Subject: Thank you for the opportunity, Lorelai
I wanted to thank you for taking the time to meet with me on Wednesday. I am very excited about the opportunity to work at the Dragonfly Inn!
I was thinking about what Michel said regarding customer feedback on your social media channels. In my last role as Guest Relations Manager, I found that personally responding to comments on social media resulted in an overall increase in repeat customers. I hope that helps.
I also wanted to say that you were right about the coffee at Luke's. I stopped by on my way home. Delicious!
Please feel free to contact me if you find you need any more information. I look forward to our call next week as discussed. Thank you once again, Lorelai.
Like what you see? Keep reading and we'll show you how to make your own thank you email after an interview.
2. Who and When - The Logistics of Sending a Post-interview Thank You Email
But who gets it? What if you interviewed with multiple people?
Send a thank you email after every interview to everyone that was in the room with you.
Send a thank you email to the one person who gave you an email address.
The exception to the rule would be the panel interview, especially if many of the participants joined via phone or Skype.
In this situation, it’s okay to send one thank you email after an interview addressed to everyone.
But what if you don’t have the email addresses for everyone?
It’s okay to send one email to the person whose address you have with a postscript at the bottom requesting that they forward the email to the other people who were present.
Alternatively, you can request the email address of the other people in the postscript so that you can send them personalized emails as well.
What if you don’t have ANY email addresses?
Contact the person who organized your interview - the recruiter or HR specialist. Ask for the hiring manager's email address.
Have a thank you note written before your interview so you can leave it at reception on your way out the door.
Why is it a bad idea to write a note beforehand?
Because you have no chance to reflect on the conversations held during your interview or personalize the note, defeating one of the main purposes of the action.
Still can't get an address? Call the front desk and inquire about the possibility of obtaining an email address.
If a receptionist insists that giving out email addresses is not company policy, ask if you may prepare a letter to leave with them so that they may give it to the proper person.
How soon should you send a thank you email after an interview?
Within 24 hours after your interview.
Two or three days.
Now, normal post takes two or three days. And that's far too late. But what if you want to send a handwritten thank you letter after your interview?
In that case, you should send a post-interview thank you email within 24 hours, alerting a hiring manager to the fact that you’ve dropped a handwritten note in the mail.
What if you interview on a Friday, and you can’t get an email out until after working hours?
Even if you have to send an email after working hours, that’s okay.
In that case, you can also wait until the following Monday if you know the hiring manager will not check their inbox until then.
Pro Tip: If you interview with multiple people, ask for business cards during the interview, so you don’t have to search for emails later.
3. Post-interview Thank You Email Or Letter - Which Do You Send?
Most hiring managers (87%) agree that it is appropriate to receive a thank you email after an interview instead of a handwritten letter.
It’s up to you to decide whether or not a hiring manager would appreciate an email or a letter more. In some cases, a hiring manager may not find an email appropriate at all.
For example, if you are applying to a stiff, suit-and-tie law firm, ala Devil’s Advocate, you may want to send a handwritten thank you letter after your interview.
While some old school companies may see an email as a breach of etiquette, Yale Law School says that it is “preferable [to use email] given the time crunch,” but you should keep the professional business format and tone.
To sum up, in 99.99% of situations it is more than okay to send a thank you email after an interview.
Another 45% of recruiters will reject your resume if you don't attach a cover letter. Not sure how to write one? Read our guide: "How To Write A Cover Letter [Complete Guide With Examples]"
4. Tone, Style, Length - How to Write a Thank You Letter After an Interview
The key to writing an effective thank you email after an interview is to make it personal.
A personal message that address topics brought up in the interview.
Post-interview thank you email templates or fill-in-the-blank sample thank you letters.
There are millions of sample thank you emails on the Internet. If you ask Google for templates, it will deliver.
I know. It’s extremely tempting to fill in a template. Filling in the blanks gets that email out faster and makes you feel confident that you sent something correct.
Resist that temptation. Resist.
The whole point of sending a thank you email after an interview is:
- To reiterate your interest in the position.
- To keep your sparkling self at the forefront of a recruiter’s mind.
- To reinforce your uniqueness as a candidate.
- And yes, to express gratitude.
With that in mind, you’ll need some more pointers to get started.
Write a short and sweet note. Implement a three paragraph rule.
Give a play-by-play recap of your interview, and go into detail about how awesome you are.
Here is a very basic outline of the type of information you should include:
Hello - thank you - I enjoyed talking to you about that project that I know I have some solutions for - I hope the wedding planning continues to go well - I hope to hear from you in a week as you said - Sincerely - Bye.
- In the first paragraph, express your gratitude for the opportunity.
- Use the second paragraph to comment on the value you’d bring to the company by mentioning a project or solution that you discussed.
- In the third paragraph, you can touch on something that you felt was left out during the interview. Or you can refer to a personal topic that you and the hiring manager bonded over, such as the wedding planning mentioned in the example.
Aim for around 200 words and remember that hiring managers are people too.
As far as tone is concerned, the degree of formality you use should reflect how formal the recruiter was at your interview.
Again, it is up to you to decide how formal to be. There are no hard and fast rules.
You can use the hiring manager’s first name if you know it for the sake of personalization.
You can attach a formal letter, properly formatted, as a PDF file. Then write a shorter thank you email after an interview if you want to make sure that you’ve covered all of your bases.
Need more information on sending emails to hiring managers? Emailing your resume is often your first contact. Read our guide on how to establish contact in the first place: "How To Email Your Resume To Get More Job Offers (Examples)"
5. What to Write - Sample Thank You Email for After an Interview
I know, I just got done telling you that samples are bad. But this section gives you sample ideas for the content of your post-interview thank you email.
Start out with using “the three W’s” to guide you. What are the three W’s?
Well, to be honest, it’s the five W’s, and they are who, what, when, where, and why.
It’s a technique used by writers, journalists, and genius kids writing essays for English teachers.
But you only need three - who, what, and when.
Who - the hiring manager.
Write a thank you email after an interview that focuses on the hiring manager.
Write a thank you email after an interview that is a summary of your skills and greatness.
They already read your resume. They know your skills. It’s time to shift gears and focus on the hiring manager now.
Tammy Kabell, CEO of Career Resume Consulting, says:
"Thank you letters are there to increase your likability not to sell yourself. You want to raise your relevancy and remind the hiring manager why they liked you. And taking the time to do something rare, like writing a handwritten note, raises these factors."
What - your value and a personal bonding topic.
If you are focusing on the hiring manager, there are two things that you should address in the body of your letter.
First, you should mention that you can bring value to them by helping them with a project or finding a solution for a problem that they have.
Think back to your interview, was there anything that got said about how you would accomplish something for them? Refer to that and reiterate how you will help.
Next, think if there was any personal topic that you and the recruiter bonded over, such as a shared hobby or interest. Make a reference to that at this point in your post-interview thank you note.
Solutions and personal bonding topics.
Your skills, accomplishments, and desires.
When - mention when you expect to hear back from them.
You will want to pave the way for a follow-up. After an interview, it is typical to follow up to see if they’ve made a decision or not.
And that’s the beauty of sending a thank you email after an interview. It does the job of a follow-up dressed in thank-you-note clothes. Plus you get the opportunity to announce when they can expect the actual follow-up call.
Write two lines.
The first line should encourage them to contact you if they need more information.
Please let me know if I can provide you with any additional information.
And one that lets them know when you will follow up with them.
As discussed, I will give you a call in two weeks to follow up and check in with you. I look forward to hearing from you.
If you made plans for a follow-up during your interview, refer to the pre-arranged time.
What goes in the subject line?
A typical inbox reveals about 60 characters of an email’s subject line. That number gets reduced to 25-30 characters on mobile devices.
It’s the same as when you want to email a resumeto a hiring manager.
So, “thank you” (with a space) is already nine characters, giving you 51 left to use.
Here are five variations less than 60 characters:
- Thank you, [hiring manager’s name]
- Thank you for the interview, [hiring manager’s first name]
- Thank you for the opportunity, [hiring manager’s first name]
- Writing to say thank you for the interview
- I wanted to thank you for the chance to interview with you
So what would a thank you email after an interview look like in the end?
Subject:Just wanted to say thank you for the interview, Melanie
I wanted to thank you for taking the time to meet with me on Friday. I am very excited about the opportunity to work for Aunt Pittypat’s Kittycat Emporium!
I was thinking about the problem you’re having with selling premium cat toys. I remembered that when I began to organize open house days for customers at my last job, premium toy sales went up by 10%. All we did was allow customers to bring their cats in to try out new toys. I hope that helps!
I also wanted to say good luck with your petunias. I just tried the technique with the banana peels that you suggested to get rid of aphids, and I am looking forward to the results. I will have to let you know how it goes.
Please feel free to contact me if you find you need any more information. I look forward to our call in two weeks as we discussed. Thank you once again, Melanie.
Pro Tip: Note the informal tone of the email. Rene decided to write Melanie using a friendly tone because she felt that the interview had gone the same way.
6. No One Does It, But Adding Personal Touches Impresses Hiring Managers
If you would like to add a few personal touches to your thank you email after an interview, here are some ideas:
Add a link to your website, blog, or portfolio - even if they were already on your resume.
That will remind the hiring manager that you’ve got a blog and give them easy access to it.
Add the link in the section about providing more information like this:
Please feel free to contact me if you need any more information, or visit my website at www.johnsmith.com
- Use Nice Stationery
If you do decide to drop a handwritten note in the mail, go with professional, personalized stationery instead of a greeting card.
If you’re going to go with a personal touch, go all the way.
- Attach a Formal Letter as a PDF
If you decide not to send a handwritten note by mail, you can still write a formal letter and attach it to your email as a PDF as discussed above.
It shows that you’ve gone the extra mile.
Pro Tip: Don't forget to proofread your email. You can use apps like Grammarly or Language Tool to help you.
The three commandments of sending a thank you email after an interview are as follows:
- You must always send one.
- You must always send one to everyone.
- You must always send one within 24 hours.
The rest is up to you. Just remember to add personal touches and to gauge the level of formality based on the atmosphere of your interview.
No hiring manager in the world wouldn’t love to receive an authentic, personal thank you note after an interview.
And it gives you a golden opportunity to stay in the good graces and the memory of a hiring manager long after that last handshake.
Still not sure whether to send an email or a traditional thank-you note? Not sure which interviewer to thank? Leave us a note in the comments, and we will get back to you. Thanks for reading!
Bonus: Download FREE step-by-step checklist of things to do before an interview. “Things You Need To Do Before Your Big Interview.”